Hey man this is really good I just have one question in paragraph 4, sentence 4 you say "a century of men" is that what you meant? I'm not trying to troll I've just never heard that used as an adjective. Great writing though, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
Well, you see, in the old Roman Legions they would refer to any quantity of 100 as a century, even their soldiers. We just simplified it to mean only 100 years. Since what I wrote was based off of the Roman Empire, it seemed like a good idea to keep their standards of naming and measurement.
Very cool man, and good job on the research. I'm always glad to see writing from a factual and not fictional standpoint. I'm not baggin on fiction, I just like to feel like I'm learning something and not just reading something pulled out of a hat haha 10/10 man keep 'em coming! :D
Alright cool man and any tips for my anime reviews? For me it's hard because there's a lot that I want to talk about but that runs the risk of spoilers so I was looking for tips on what to focus on haha It would be much appreciated :)
Well, don't do too much plot in your reviews, I suppose. Just give the basic premise of the series, and say some things about unrelated to the plot, like the art style, or the musical score.
Hey man this is really good I just have one question in paragraph 4, sentence 4 you say "a century of men" is that what you meant? I'm not trying to troll I've just never heard that used as an adjective. Great writing though, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
ReplyDeleteWell, you see, in the old Roman Legions they would refer to any quantity of 100 as a century, even their soldiers. We just simplified it to mean only 100 years. Since what I wrote was based off of the Roman Empire, it seemed like a good idea to keep their standards of naming and measurement.
ReplyDeleteVery cool man, and good job on the research. I'm always glad to see writing from a factual and not fictional standpoint. I'm not baggin on fiction, I just like to feel like I'm learning something and not just reading something pulled out of a hat haha 10/10 man keep 'em coming! :D
ReplyDeleteNext chapter will probly be up on sunday or monday, I'm going to try to do it bi-weekly.
ReplyDeleteAlright cool man and any tips for my anime reviews? For me it's hard because there's a lot that I want to talk about but that runs the risk of spoilers so I was looking for tips on what to focus on haha It would be much appreciated :)
ReplyDeleteWell, don't do too much plot in your reviews, I suppose. Just give the basic premise of the series, and say some things about unrelated to the plot, like the art style, or the musical score.
ReplyDeleteOk man thanks I'm putting up a video review so hopefully I won't screw it up haha
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